Katie Nguyen
(Song Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jdve08cG3pE)
(Song Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jdve08cG3pE)
T.S. Eliot’s poem “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” is a
lamenting modernist display of the longings and dissatisfactions of a young man
who feels trapped in passivity and self-doubt. Arcade Fire’s song “My Body Is A
Cage” encapsulates the internal anguish that the speaker alludes throughout the
poem. As one might expect, Eliot’s poem is much denser than the lyrics of the
song and his narrative flow explores many different avenues in the speaker’s
roundabout way of dancing around his intentions. While the forms may differ,
especially due to genre convention, both works are keen explorations of self-entrapment
and disorientation in the world at large.
Right from the start, Arcade Fire encompasses the source of
internal distress that weaves through “Prufrock,” singing, “My body is a cage
that keeps me / From dancing with the one I love / But my mind holds the key”. Arcade
Fire poignantly compares the mental paralysis of social anxiety and self-doubt to
a more tangible sense of confinement. There is a palpable frustration that
emerges in situations such as these, where the obstacles are imagined and
internal, yet still insurmountable, thus exemplified through “my mind holds the
key”. “Prufrock” is similarly trapped in a cycle of passivity and inaction, as
evidenced by his incessant self-questioning. He asks “Do I dare / Disturb the
universe?” and “So how should I presume? / And how should I begin?”. Immobilized
by doubts and negative affirmations of what he “knows to be true”, Prufrock is
stalled before he ever truly begins.
Interestingly enough, both Eliot’s poem and Arcade Fire’s
song call into play the idea of theatricality and performance through metaphor.
Though “Prufrock” is completely saturated with allusions, perhaps the most
overt reference is when he exclaims “No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant
to be; Am an attendant lord, one that will do… Full of high sentence, but a bit
obtuse”. Eliot invokes theatre and its clear archetypes to articulate his sense
of displacement in his own consciousness. He has essentially taken a backseat to
his entire life, which he dually relies upon and resents. His disproportionate self-image
relegates him to the realm of the inactionable, rendering him to the service of
the main plotline, whatever he conceives that to be. However, it also conveniently
alleviates him from ever having to exert agency or any action in pursuit of his
own wants and desires, which the lead role, the Hamlet of the story, must do.
This is where a key difference emerges between the poem and
the song. “My Body Is A Cage” is an anguished declaration of a paralyzing social
anxiety that culminates into a desperate plea to be relinquished from its grip.
Especially apparent in the ending lyrics “Set my spirit free / Set my body free,”
there is a war between the mind and the body, the desire and the execution. “Prufrock,”
which still a lamentation of a self-imposed passivity, produces a more melancholic,
regretful air that still ventures to excuse and explain his inactions. However,
it must be noted that “Prufrock” is structured as an invitation to the object
of his affection, so his leniency upon himself is careful and measured. “My Body
Is A Cage” is an inward exultation, a plea toward himself or the universe at
large. Empirically, the two works differ in their intended audience, but one
could certainly adhere “My Body Is A Cage” to “Prufrock” as an internal
representation of his torment and anxiety.
In that vein of applied analysis, the song’s application of
theatrical metaphor becomes increasingly poignant. Arcade Fire sings “I’m
standing on a stage / Of fear and self-doubt / It’s a hollow play / But they’ll
clap anyway”. Rather than playing into the utility of character in theatre, “My
Body is A Cage” utilizes the performativity aspect of the medium. He likens
himself to an unconvincing performer going through the motions of his life. Later
in the song, he sings “I’m living in an age / That calls darkness light,” denoting
his detachment from the world and its workings that stems from his lack of
being able to communicate effectively. Similar to Prufrock’s line “Full of high
sentence, but a bit obtuse,” there is an emphasis on a lack of intent behind
the words the speakers are able to say that contrasts the surplus of desire
that they cannot articulate. Later in the poem, Eliot writes “It is impossible
to say just what I mean! / But as if a magic lantern threw the nerves in
patterns on a screen” which is extraordinarily similar to the lyric, “Though my
language is dead / Still the shapes fill my head”. Both lines evoke the sense
of an inarticulable, emotional vastness that both speakers struggle to express
in any kind of lucid or intelligible manner. This, in turn, feeds into the frustration
and internal anguish that has been culminating into a profound sense of tormented
regret and angst.
Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock” and
Arcade Fire’s “My Body is A Cage” concern themselves with a nuanced form of
angst and dissatisfaction with one’s life and place in the world at large. While
there are certainly some tonal and empirical differences, “My Body is A Cage”
offers a fitting and powerful supplement to “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”
that delves into the intricacies of internal journey that Prufrock could
conceivably suffer from.
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Hi Katie, first I want to say that you chose a great song to compare "Prufrock" to because it certainly exemplifies the same entrapment, displacement, and motionlessness he feels enduring the struggles of adolescence. In addition, your analysis of how theatre functions differently in each work is very thorough. In "Prufrock" the reference to Hamlet exemplifies how stuck he feels and how he lacks the ability to take control over his life, perhaps because of his debilitating social anxiety. On the other hand, Arcade Fire utilizes theatre as a means to explain how one is unable to communicate because he/she feels so detached from the world. Your analysis is very thorough, but I would switch around paragraph four and five so that your analysis of theatre in each work is on top of the other, making it easier for the reader to compare the two.
ReplyDeleteKatie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great song choice! The song really captures the same feelings of an internal struggles with oneself due to crippling social anxiety. My only comment would be that it would be easier on your audience if you kept your analysis of theatricality in both "Prufrock" and "My Body is Cage" closer together. Besides that, you did an amazing job and really seem to understand the feelings that both writers were trying to express in their pieces.